Well of course, and I was happy when you appeared in my deviantWatch! Just keep it comin!...

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Have you returned?!?

I nearly thought you had left for good!!!

And I must have undevwatched you for some reason...



My apologies... if I've miscommunicated anything through that action, I am most sorry, because I've always held you in high esteem.

Re+devwatch.

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Be

Well thank you! That is the first compliment I have received for that design. Indeed, it is very straightforward.

The reason the poetry and images appear as smoothly as they do is because I do not use frames; I use a DIV block to contain each poem and can therefore toggle their visibility as I wish. All the poetry is loaded into the single index.php file and it does not have to download it when you click a title link. Fire any questions you may have at me.

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hello.

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pity this busy monster, manunkind, not.

Heck, I stopped by your page yesterday too not realizing that I had already dropped a 'yoo hoo' a couple weeks before. Good to see you though! Stick around, huh!

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..yoo hoo.... ?

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~pixiepoetry
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Xzoa

The intangiblity
of my soul
frustrates my mind,
yet my mind,
no less tangible.

There is comfort
in the shadowy dispositions
of the sun-shaded daffodile
who, yearning for sunlight,
itself shines a child's yellow


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Intangiblity
of the soul
frustrates the mind
the mind (Abbey, speak this stanza without 'yet.' Should there be punctuation to aid continuity?)
no less tangible.

Find comfort
in dispositions shadowed,
as the sun-shaded daffodile
who, yearning for sunlight,
shines child yellow



Tag, you're it
You can see my inclinations are not dark and are non-explicit (metaphorical or figurative)

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Do you know that if someone had told me when I was in high school how many things I would have going on and roles I had to fulfill in my fourth and fifth years of college, I would have melted in my boots immediately.

Let's continue this. Let me also incorporate a twist. Let's write two versions as an exercise! The first will be personalized and more cathartic-sounding, and the second will remove mention of the self and will be more philosophical and didactic-sounding. Does that sound alright? Fun


The intangibility,
of my soul,
frustrates my mind.
yet my mind,
no less intangible.

there is comfort

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intangibility
of the soul
frustrates the mind.
yet the mind,
no less intangible.

find comfort

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I'm slow, give me time.

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